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Marysha of the Potatoes

4/25/2014

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Little girls in the village didn't have dolls. They played with potatoes instead. A twig here, a sprig of pine there and you had a well-dressed playmate. When Mamushka called, all evidence of an ordinary childhood was stripped from the potatoes in order to feed the family. Every meal was dependent upon potatoes. And so, little girls in the village had to eat their playthings.

The village didn't see much of the war. Every few months a bedraggled soldier from Germany or the Americas would wander through, collapse on the steps of the church and beg for mercy in his native tongue. The Babushkas would bring a bucket of water and, depending on the man, would ladle it to his lips or drop it on his head. No one ever came to rescue these men. Some stayed to become potato farmers and marry the less attractive girls. Some had other ideas and shuffled on.

Cyganka, or gypsies, were a common sight as well. Their ornate caravans, adorned with lush curtains and jangling bells were the delight of all little girls. Gypsy sightings were far more satisfying than consuming their dolls for supper. Marysha was the most curious girl and approached an elderly gypsy woman counting out silver coins. She forced herself not to blink as nimble, veiny hands rubbed two coins together. Marysha expected magic could happen at any moment, and would not permit herself to blink.

“You are a very nasty girl,” the old woman sneered. “You steal your grandmother’s apples off her trees in the spring, and hoard her cherries in your fat cheeks. Your poor mother is heavy with another baby and your father ---“

“My father is a lousy drunk!” Marysha spat on the ground. “Good for nothing! Mama gives him all the meat and we only get potatoes and milk. We never have money because he takes it to Warsawa and drinks it all away.” Marysha ground her foot into the spit and turned on her heel to leave the old gypsy.

“Careful” she whispered. “Girls often end up just like their mothers”. Marysha rolled her eyes and returned to her potato dolls. The old woman would be gone soon, like the others, and one day Marysha would be old enough to go to Warsawa herself. She was too pretty to marry a handicapped soldier. She would not be like her mother, uneducated and beholden to the town drunk. She would do better. She would be smart.

Marysha did not think of the old woman again until many years later. As her sister rose to give a toast to the happy bride and groom, Marysha thought of her parents. They were back in the village, likely eating kielbasa and potatoes mashed with milk. As the champagne flutes clinked from one guest to the other, Marysha reached for her husband’s hand. He was not there. The photographer found him at the bar, a menagerie of bottles at his feet, downing the last of the vodka.

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Submitted for this week's Prompted at tipsylit.com. 
Prompt: Write a story about an embarrassing prophecy. 
Word limit: 500 (nailed it)

Click that attractive image on the left to learn more about the weekly prompt, or the glitterati shenanigans going down at tipsylit. While you're at it, join EC Readers!

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J. Raven link
4/25/2014 04:28:33 pm

The way you describe a scene...

Solid story again - loved it! The flash forward to her wedding night really worked! Something tells me this little girls is going to get hubby jerked in line.

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Mollie Claire
4/26/2014 02:30:14 am

She's a tough Polish girl; she'll either knock him out or make him sleep outside when he's drunk. :)

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Ranting Crow link
4/25/2014 09:42:58 pm

Just wow. Loving it.

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Suzanne link
4/25/2014 10:08:30 pm

Ah, the arrogance of youth. She should have listened to the old woman. Great story! So well crafted and nicely told.

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Jackie Law link
4/25/2014 11:04:49 pm

I love your writing and this story flows beautifully. I especially like the imagery and dialogue in this. Good one :)

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Mollie Claire
4/26/2014 02:29:04 am

Thank you! :)

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AZ Gringa link
4/27/2014 05:53:33 am

Wow. You have an amazing eye for detail and a beautiful voice with which to describe it. I feel badly for poor Marysha. Time to break in her rolling pin on hubby, methinks!

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Mollie Claire link
4/30/2014 10:25:00 am

Thank you!

I think I'll bring her back this week, just to see where the characters go. ;)

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Ashley Kagaoan link
4/30/2014 05:39:26 am

I have to agree, wow! Superb writing. Loved every sentence. Well done.

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Mollie Claire
4/30/2014 10:20:42 am

Ashley, you totally made my week with this comment. I really enjoy *your* writing. Thank you for popping over and commenting!

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